Inspiring a Love for Lifelong Learning
Lend Me Your Literacy Day
Year 4 experienced a truly memorable day with Mr Smith, from Lend Me Your Literacy.
Ashford Park year 4 children had a GREAT day of developing our spooky story writing on Monday 2nd June 2014, when Mr Smith a year 6 teacher from Lend Me Your Literacy came to visit. We had very active discussions about the types of vocabulary that we could use in our writing to make our stories REALLY spooky!
We spoke about how an author would go on to improve their writing from their original draft version, so we discussed the skills required to draft, edit and improve. These discussions helped us to consider the marking in our own English books and how these marking comments from our teachers and peers also help us to improve our writing.
PLEASE have a look at our draft writing published on the Lend Me Your Literacy website and post your comments, as these will encourage us to become even greater authors. THANK YOU.
As of Saturday 7th June 2014, we have already had 514 VIEWS!